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      &lt;em&gt;&#8220;The headlines Google provides are so lame that I either need to rewrite them or point at someone else who is writing about what Google posted,&#8221;&lt;/em&gt;
      &lt;a href="http://blog.searchenginewatch.com/blog/061010-104958"&gt;says Danny&lt;/a&gt;, who publishes a regular news roundup and uses headlines as links.&#160; &lt;/p&gt;
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  &lt;p&gt;Yet Danny&#8217;s gripe raises an important point, because regardless of the media channel, &lt;strong&gt;a good headline should be extremely powerful&lt;/strong&gt;. &lt;/p&gt;
  &lt;p&gt;Headline considerations are one of the first things I mention when traditional journalists ask me about the difference between online and offline.&#160;&lt;br /&gt;&#160;&lt;br /&gt;In an offline environment journalists tend to favour a witty headline, especially if it is some kind of pun... &lt;/p&gt;
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    &lt;img alt="Rhino - not in fact a rhino" height="112" src="http://e-consultancy.lemonfoundation.com/Rhino%20-%20not%20in%20fact%20a%20rhino.jpg" width="82" /&gt;
  &lt;/p&gt;
  &lt;p&gt;&#160;or rhyme...&lt;/p&gt;
  &lt;p&gt;
    &lt;img alt="Crook Smacks Hook" height="112" src="http://e-consultancy.lemonfoundation.com/Well%20done%20crook.jpg" width="87" /&gt;
  &lt;/p&gt;
  &lt;p&gt;&#160;or otherwise aim for something downright weird and attention grabbing...&lt;/p&gt;
  &lt;p&gt;
    &lt;img alt="Harry - not in fact a Nazi" src="http://e-consultancy.lemonfoundation.com/Harry%20-%20not%20in%20fact%20a%20Nazi.jpg" /&gt;
  &lt;/p&gt;
  &lt;p&gt;With a big three-quarter page picture on the front of a newspaper this sort of thing works fine &#8211; it grabs the attention, and hey, it might even result in a belly laugh or two.&lt;/p&gt;
  &lt;p&gt;But in an online environment wit / puns / rhymes doesn&#8217;t tend to work in your favour, as the web is built on links, which are restricted to a handful of words and tend not to be accompanied by a related picture. Online, headlines ideally need to reflect the full story. &lt;strong&gt;Headlines = links&lt;/strong&gt;.&lt;/p&gt;
  &lt;p&gt;Furthermore, if a headline doesn&#8217;t tell Google or Yahoo or MSN a single useful thing about the content of your story then it could work against you (it may be seen to be a &lt;strong&gt;negative ranking factor&lt;/strong&gt;).&lt;/p&gt;
  &lt;p&gt;Online, you need to &lt;strong&gt;manage expectations&lt;/strong&gt; a little better, otherwise writers like Danny might not take a chance on clicking on a link.&#160;Unless they really wanted that pony, of course. So you need to also consider this from a PR perspective.&lt;/p&gt;
  &lt;p&gt;As I have alluded to, the big factor to consider is of course &lt;strong&gt;SEO&lt;/strong&gt;, not that the Google Blog authors need to worry about that sort of thing.&lt;/p&gt;
  &lt;p&gt;Headlines are &lt;strong&gt;very powerful&lt;/strong&gt; when it comes to search rankings, so writers should be aware of their employer&#8217;s business goals before labelling content. Headlines should be descriptive, should contain a proportionate amount of keywords / phrases, and shouldn&#8217;t be too long (or too short). Experiment to see what works best.&lt;/p&gt;
  &lt;p&gt;Authors should also be aware of the &lt;strong&gt;psychological factors&lt;/strong&gt; that can influence clickthrough rates. It isn&#8217;t purely about SEO, or wit, or descriptiveness, but is a balancing act.&lt;/p&gt;
  &lt;p&gt;For example, a headline with a question mark at the end forces the reader to ask himself a question, whereas a statement can be easily overlooked. &lt;/p&gt;
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      &lt;em&gt;"When you ask a question you're forcing readers to ask themselves something. You're not simply making a statement which is forgotten immediately, you're forcing readers to think,"&lt;/em&gt;
      &lt;a href="http://www.webcredible.co.uk/user-friendly-resources/search-engine-optimisation/headings.shtml"&gt;notes Steve Jackson via Webcredible&lt;/a&gt;. &lt;/p&gt;
  &lt;/blockquote&gt;
  &lt;p&gt;There is more on copywriting for SEO in our &lt;a href="http://econsultancy.com/reports/search-engine-optimization-seo-best-practice-guide-2007"&gt;Search Engine Marketing Best Practice Guide&lt;/a&gt;, for anybody who wants to read up more on this subject.&lt;/p&gt;
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      &lt;Quote&gt;&#8220;The headlines Google provides are so lame that I either need to rewrite them or point at someone else who is writing about what Google posted,&#8221;&lt;/Quote&gt;
      &lt;Link URL="http://blog.searchenginewatch.com/blog/061010-104958" Window="New"&gt;says Danny&lt;/Link&gt;, who publishes a regular news roundup and uses headlines as links.&#160; &lt;/Paragraph&gt;
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  &lt;Paragraph&gt;Yet Danny&#8217;s gripe raises an important point, because regardless of the media channel, &lt;Emphasis&gt;a good headline should be extremely powerful&lt;/Emphasis&gt;. &lt;/Paragraph&gt;
  &lt;Paragraph&gt;Headline considerations are one of the first things I mention when traditional journalists ask me about the difference between online and offline.&#160;&lt;LineBreak /&gt;&#160;&lt;LineBreak /&gt;In an offline environment journalists tend to favour a witty headline, especially if it is some kind of pun... &lt;/Paragraph&gt;
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    &lt;Image AlternateText="Rhino - not in fact a rhino" Source="http://e-consultancy.lemonfoundation.com/Rhino%20-%20not%20in%20fact%20a%20rhino.jpg" Width="82" Height="112"&gt;
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  &lt;Paragraph&gt;&#160;or rhyme...&lt;/Paragraph&gt;
  &lt;Paragraph Align="Center"&gt;
    &lt;Image AlternateText="Crook Smacks Hook" Source="http://e-consultancy.lemonfoundation.com/Well%20done%20crook.jpg" Width="87" Height="112"&gt;
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  &lt;Paragraph&gt;&#160;or otherwise aim for something downright weird and attention grabbing...&lt;/Paragraph&gt;
  &lt;Paragraph Align="Center"&gt;
    &lt;Image AlternateText="Harry - not in fact a Nazi" Source="http://e-consultancy.lemonfoundation.com/Harry%20-%20not%20in%20fact%20a%20Nazi.jpg"&gt;
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  &lt;/Paragraph&gt;
  &lt;Paragraph&gt;With a big three-quarter page picture on the front of a newspaper this sort of thing works fine &#8211; it grabs the attention, and hey, it might even result in a belly laugh or two.&lt;/Paragraph&gt;
  &lt;Paragraph&gt;But in an online environment wit / puns / rhymes doesn&#8217;t tend to work in your favour, as the web is built on links, which are restricted to a handful of words and tend not to be accompanied by a related picture. Online, headlines ideally need to reflect the full story. &lt;Emphasis&gt;Headlines = links&lt;/Emphasis&gt;.&lt;/Paragraph&gt;
  &lt;Paragraph&gt;Furthermore, if a headline doesn&#8217;t tell Google or Yahoo or MSN a single useful thing about the content of your story then it could work against you (it may be seen to be a &lt;Emphasis&gt;negative ranking factor&lt;/Emphasis&gt;).&lt;/Paragraph&gt;
  &lt;Paragraph&gt;Online, you need to &lt;Emphasis&gt;manage expectations&lt;/Emphasis&gt; a little better, otherwise writers like Danny might not take a chance on clicking on a link.&#160;Unless they really wanted that pony, of course. So you need to also consider this from a PR perspective.&lt;/Paragraph&gt;
  &lt;Paragraph&gt;As I have alluded to, the big factor to consider is of course &lt;Emphasis&gt;SEO&lt;/Emphasis&gt;, not that the Google Blog authors need to worry about that sort of thing.&lt;/Paragraph&gt;
  &lt;Paragraph&gt;Headlines are &lt;Emphasis&gt;very powerful&lt;/Emphasis&gt; when it comes to search rankings, so writers should be aware of their employer&#8217;s business goals before labelling content. Headlines should be descriptive, should contain a proportionate amount of keywords / phrases, and shouldn&#8217;t be too long (or too short). Experiment to see what works best.&lt;/Paragraph&gt;
  &lt;Paragraph&gt;Authors should also be aware of the &lt;Emphasis&gt;psychological factors&lt;/Emphasis&gt; that can influence clickthrough rates. It isn&#8217;t purely about SEO, or wit, or descriptiveness, but is a balancing act.&lt;/Paragraph&gt;
  &lt;Paragraph&gt;For example, a headline with a question mark at the end forces the reader to ask himself a question, whereas a statement can be easily overlooked. &lt;/Paragraph&gt;
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      &lt;Quote&gt;"When you ask a question you're forcing readers to ask themselves something. You're not simply making a statement which is forgotten immediately, you're forcing readers to think,"&lt;/Quote&gt;
      &lt;Link URL="http://www.webcredible.co.uk/user-friendly-resources/search-engine-optimisation/headings.shtml" Window="New"&gt;notes Steve Jackson via Webcredible&lt;/Link&gt;. &lt;/Paragraph&gt;
  &lt;/Block&gt;
  &lt;Paragraph&gt;There is more on copywriting for SEO in our &lt;Link URL="http://econsultancy.com/reports/search-engine-optimization-seo-best-practice-guide-2007" Window="New"&gt;Search Engine Marketing Best Practice Guide&lt;/Link&gt;, for anybody who wants to read up more on this subject.&lt;/Paragraph&gt;
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    &lt;img alt="The Google Pony" height="87" src="http://e-consultancy.lemonfoundation.com/The%20Google%20Pony.jpg" width="130" /&gt; Danny Sullivan has fired off a few rounds at the authors over at Google Blog, who habitually use non-descriptive headlines such as &#8216;Greetings, Earthlings!&#8217; and, our favourite: &#8216;Yes, you can have a pony&#8217;. &lt;/strong&gt;
  &lt;p&gt;As an expert in SEO you&#8217;d think Danny&#8217;s beef would be linked to a lack of keywords in titles, but this isn&#8217;t in fact the problem...&lt;/p&gt;
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    &lt;/Image&gt; Danny Sullivan has fired off a few rounds at the authors over at Google Blog, who habitually use non-descriptive headlines such as &#8216;Greetings, Earthlings!&#8217; and, our favourite: &#8216;Yes, you can have a pony&#8217;. &lt;/Emphasis&gt;
  &lt;Paragraph&gt;As an expert in SEO you&#8217;d think Danny&#8217;s beef would be linked to a lack of keywords in titles, but this isn&#8217;t in fact the problem...&lt;/Paragraph&gt;
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  <learn-more-formatted>&lt;p&gt;Read Econsultancy's &lt;strong&gt;&lt;a href="http://econsultancy.com/reports/cms-survey-report"&gt;CMS Survey Report&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/strong&gt; and &lt;strong&gt;&lt;a href="http://econsultancy.com/reports/content-management-systems-cms-buyer-s-guide-2007"&gt;CMS Buyer's Guide&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/strong&gt; to learn more about this topic.&lt;/p&gt;</learn-more-formatted>
  <learn-more-unformatted>&lt;p&gt;Read Econsultancy's &lt;strong&gt;&lt;a href="http://econsultancy.com/reports/cms-survey-report"&gt;CMS Survey Report&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/strong&gt; and &lt;strong&gt;&lt;a href="http://econsultancy.com/reports/content-management-systems-cms-buyer-s-guide-2007"&gt;CMS Buyer's Guide&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/strong&gt; to learn more about this topic.&lt;/p&gt;</learn-more-unformatted>
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  <name>Witty vs descriptive headlines - what works best?</name>
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